Teh Wozzinator

Esme did a good job of editing, and I don't have time for a long edit.... I must say though: your wording at the very start confused me (although i ...

wow, your wording is amazing here!!! i must say, i was hooked immediately. this story is so awesome. (just try to keep it PG-13, please...) your wording and writing style ...

my edits are in bold This is my first poem posted, hope you like it! Please tell me what you think! I'm not very good at writing poems on the ...

my edits in bold I'm not really sure if this is the right place for this but... This is something I wrote a few years ago, originally it was a ...

I noticed two grammatical errors, and those were just that you didn't put a letter in a word. Your wording was good most of the time, but i agree with ...

Well, I just seriously read through this as an editor, and except for a bit of punctuation that others have noticed I really liked it. Your wording was great, and ...

Haha, this made me laugh, but I agree, it's not very serious. What's with the monster? A poem like this might fit with little kids, but not a teenage girl......well......I ...

I just read it and quoted it and got ready to edit, but as I went through I realized... I don't have anything to edit! This was a really good ...

my edits in bold (and since i don't think i've edited your stuff before...get ready for me to be harsh [probably]) Pablo was so great, I know to be with ...

my edits are (as always) in bold CHAPTER 1 Miss Liana had, unfortunately, woken up to[b]o early before her time to do so. This last sentence is really weird. I ...

it wasn't bad, but it needs a lot of work. i can't really say anything else that Suzanne hasn't said, so i'll leave it at that. but i will press ...

i must ask...what contest? my edits will be in bold As stated, this is for Author13's contest. I'm not sure how the last few paragraphs are, so.................. yes. Have fun! ...

Wow Matt, your stuff is great every time. (Well, ok, i've just read Snoink, other than this, but STILL!! lol) anyways, I must say...great. i really liked the rhythm, it ...

nothing to edit, but one comment: your rhythm is amazing! unlike many on the site, it's great.... the first two lines were my favorite. it was slightly dull, i guess, ...

wow, i've really started to like poetry, and there's lots of good stuff on the site. (and a bit of bad stuff). this is definitely among the good. it was ...